we have long been together
in a great endeavour,
in a war worth fighting for
in a relationship brought forth
by a great standpoint.
though we may be parted
in the struggle
you are always with me;
I will cherish your sweet smile
as I am with the oppressed
together we shall be
in our struggle for freedom.
as the world turns
you will always be with me
our hope and dreams
will shine through.
everywhere
there is struggle and conflict
our strength and conviction
will certainly meet
with those who forge
with those who sow
a new thinking
for a free tomorrow
credits to MC of SFCHRP
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poems... i really miss writing one
ReplyDeleteAng sarap basahin ng "you are always with me" :) Thanks for sharing! What a good way to start my day!
ReplyDelete..parang may pinaparinggan ata to ha.. ;D
ReplyDeleteparang...parang sino Doc? hahahaha
Deletenice!! I am still thinking what title to give this one hehehehe
ReplyDeleteYou're good at this. I like the pc. :)
ReplyDeleteA very nice poem..
ReplyDeleteUntitled ba talaga ang title nyan, or sadyang wala syang title? hehe.. Sana merong title, ganda ng poem eh.
Nangialam? lol.
this post deserves a title... O_o
ReplyDeletewow what a wonderful poem is that, how come it is untitled... keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHave you heard the song A Time For Us? If you haven't you should. Your poem and that song has the same message.
ReplyDeletewow I love your poem
ReplyDeleteNow this is something new to break the reading routine for the day.
ReplyDeleteNice composition!
Nakakainlove naman to.. I used to write poems din when I was still in school. I was once part of the paetry deprtment of our college paper. haha! not sure what happened, parang nagsawa skin ung talent na un. Bigla na lang lumayas. ung espiritu ng blogging ang suumapi skin. Haha! Thanks for sharing this. Cheers!
ReplyDeletegreat composition. i wish i could write a piece as beautiful as this one. love it.
ReplyDeleteMakes me think of the rigth title .ano kaya? well,kung yung author nga nahirapang lagyan ng title ,ako pa kaya. nice poem.
ReplyDeleteuuuyyyy
ReplyDeleteit's a beautiful read though i wonder what triggered you to write this
This is nice! You need to put a title to this one. It's too nice to remain untitled.
ReplyDeletenice nice! nasubukan ko na din gmwa nang poem,mahirap pero tnapos ko pa din. isip ako ano masusuggest na title para sa poem mo.
ReplyDeleteit is nice to make a poem if you are inspired by someone that you love.. =)
ReplyDeleteit is nice to make a poem if you are inspired by someone you love
ReplyDeleteI used to write sonnets when I was young. Your poem inspired me to become young again.... I mean write sonnets again. :)
ReplyDeleteAng ganda! May pinaghuhugutan talaga ha.. :D
ReplyDeletelove the pain.. it was creatively done
ReplyDeleteWoot, nice one! I actually miss writing poems like this. Good for you :)
ReplyDeleteohhhh nice one. I'm not really good on poem writing but I appreciate them.
ReplyDeletenice poem Paliits which evokes a relationship between lovers and a war-torn friends.galing!
ReplyDeletenice poem. i'm not really good in writing poems, i remember when i was still in HS and college, i always try to write a poem pero wala talaga. hehe!
ReplyDeletetry publishing your poems at deviantart.com
ReplyDeleteso nice. naiimagine ko yong masayang magkasintahan, magkahawak kamay habang tumatawid sa isang maingay, madilim, magulong gusali. (maiguhit nga. ^^)
ReplyDeleteIts been more than 15 years since I composed one. Please keep on writing, I might share mine when I find my writings back home. ^_^
ReplyDeletewow! This is a really nice poem! nakakain love hehe
ReplyDeleteThese versed thoughts are well expressed on freedom. Nice poem!
ReplyDeleteHmmm... halatang inspired at in love ang nagsulat :-D
ReplyDeleteGreat poem! This reminds me to create my own.
ReplyDeleteThis is Nice..
ReplyDeleteThank you for all the comments :) would post some more of this next time :)
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